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Composer:
Ed Hooke
(except words in line 11 & first half of line 12
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Date of Composition:
September 2010
Date of Recording/Copyright:
2010
Gorses and grasses and grazes and glasses
Discards of carpet, iron, secret abode
Willow-
November firelight. We watched it explode.
Light the sky.
Forget the hour.
Fireworks shower.
A year goes by.
Working wild words with a wish to weave wisdom
Scribbling songs about sunlight and dregs
Suddenly someone is there at the turnstyle
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Melted heart
but frozen tongue.
Song unsung.
Shy shame. We part.
Decades dispose dusty deincarnations
Meaningless memories, Mungo & Midge.
Carelessly clocking the quickening countdown.
Tomorrow's waters downstream from the bridge.
Commentary
Between Copsewood Road and Dimond Road in Bitterne Park, Southampton, England,
in the 1960s and early 1970s, lay an area of waste ground, the size of maybe 8 football
pitches. Presumably a brick factory had previously occupied all or part of it, since
it was known as "The Brick Fields". When brick production ceased there, I know not.
In my childhood, it was overgrown, the only evidence of its industrial past being
a couple of so-
Light the sky. Forget the hour.
I am indebted to Guy and the Bitterne Park website, its readers and contributors for filling in some of the gaps in my knowledge about the Brickfields.
Terry Grant, who lived at 107 Ashtree Road in the 1940s & 1950s, remembers the Brickfields
before the school was built. He tells of the 150-
From the chimney, a railway track crossed to the base of the small cliffs, where
metal coal-
Frayed away
Fate's future face.
Erased the place
where brick fields lay.
Light the sky.
Forget the hour.
Fireworks shower.
A year goes by.
Robert Bailey, a few years my junior, remembers the last days of the Brickfields. "I think I was about 8 years old when the Brickies was flattened, and all I really remember about it was we (Chris Hammerton, Keith Busson, Eric Stone, Gary White, and all the other local kids) had a den at the base of a tree" which was just behind my parents' house. He has vivid memories of climbing over the bulldozers & spoil heaps along with the other local kids, during the course of the works.
I am grateful to both Terry & Robert for sharing their memories.